Lost in Translation meets Noctural Animals

The Black List Scores 7 & 8 - Reader 1

 

This is a tragic and captivating story with a unique and well-developed female lead. Lana is compelling from beginning to end, as we see her do her dominatrix work... a very entertaining and enjoyable read...

The Black List Scores 7 & 8 – Reader 2  

 

The script is naturalistically structured and has a crisp pacing that never lags. The dominatrix scenes are thrilling. The dialogue is tight and expressive, also delivering needed humor with crisp timing... skillfully written indie drama... 

Script Shark  

 

...this script sets itself apart with a genuinely unique focal subject, a visual and alluring desert backdrop, and a central character who remains original and individualized throughout her journey...

 

this script has touched upon an exotic, alluring, and intriguing world, and in Lana, it has fashioned the broad strokes of a protagonist who seems similarly unique and appealing.